CALORIES!? Do you know what are calories? Did you know cake has millions of calories? I definitely don’t like cake! The first reason why I don’t like cake is it has lot of sugar. It has lot of calories so you will be so fat. If you eat so much you will die because it has lot of bad things and that make you die. The next reason why I don’t like cake is it is very buttery. Icings are very buttery. I don’t like buttery cake or the Icings that are creamy and sugary. The last reason why I don’t like cake is because it is so unhealthy. Calories make us unhealthy. If it is your birthday, say ”I’m not eating cake.” Never, never eat cake again!
Hi Umi. Your Opinion was very interesting to read. I like the details and how you used capitals at the beginning to hook the reader. Why don’t you like cake? You might get fat and stuff but you can lose the extra weight in your body by running and doing sports. You could also just share the cake with your classmates and eat the left up slices.
ReplyDeleteHi Umi. I also do not like cake. Is cake your least favorite sweet?
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